I thought of an alternate ending that might show more development of Agnew's character in the way that we talked about on friday.
(After Monty is thrown out)
Agnew sitting in his house bored e.g sitting and flicking through TV channels. He pauses and thinks for a second, then gets up and leaves the house.
(Split screen of different houses)
MONTY & AGNEW
Bloody hell you took your time
THE END
So basically Agnew has become more like Monty in the end, But for this to work better we might need to show hints that Agnew had a little bit of fun while Monty was in his house? Just an idea... what do you guys think?
^ Sounds quite good actually. We'll discuss this further Thursday
^ Sounds quite good actually. We'll discuss this further Thursday
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